Board Thread:Off-Topic/@comment-35324176-20181228162404/@comment-35324176-20190130041228

ForeverGØNE wrote: ForeverGØNE wrote: so I was writing a story on a diffrent account on a diffrent wiki... take a read and put feedback on this thread?

[//animal-jam-clans.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Oh_Crap..._no./Trying_the_story_thing_out https://animal-jam-clans.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Oh_Crap..._no./Trying_the_story_thing_out] please notice me Sorry, I forgot to reply <3

The story was cool, but what happened to them? What are they? What in da world is happenin?

Overrall the use of words and story line is noice, but readers can get confused on what it even is :D