Thread:Vaildated/@comment-37028012-20181008131306/@comment-34193805-20181008223715

hi sorry, when you sent this I was at school so I couldn't respond as quickly.

right now I really like the sketch so far and I'm not going to critic it bc it's only the sketch and I know you'll add a lot more detail. the anatomy itself is good, I would suggest perhaps lowering the shoulders so it looks more relaxed and not stiff to the point where the neck isn't visible (but if that's what you're going for then nvm). if you don't know what I'm talking about then don't do it, I don't want it to be ruined because of me XD

I don't think you should give it a bathing suit, it would seem kinda off unless you're doing a summer themed drawing.

also I like the legband, it looks really clean and nicely done! if everything else is going to be shaded then maybe adding a little bit of shading won't hurt.