Board Thread:Animal Jam Talk/@comment-33594242-20180728175417/@comment-33594242-20180807160828

Prettybunny98511 wrote: Serifni wrote: El1013 aj wrote: I agree mostly with Serifni, I was actually waiting for the contest to end to say it, but since someone brought it up.... XD Serifni, Ty for the tips for her :3 Are you going to enter though? No, I decided to just give some pointers. Oh hi, is there something wrong with my entry, the art i put in? XD - the head is at an odd angle, it would look more natual if you had the head turned more towards the left (your left, not the cat's)

- the tail is too low and looks very tense

- the spot over the eye made it look odd for a second, I think it's because the color is too light

- it doesn't actually look like it's sitting, more like kneeling because the front legs are long compared to the back legs

- otherwise, it's very cute and has a LOT of kawaii poof :D