Board Thread:Animal Jam Talk/@comment-33594242-20180728175417/@comment-36358644-20180809144855

El1013 aj wrote: FOUND IT! Well, it's actually pretty good so I don't actually have a lot of pointers XD

- The mouth is a little too small and thin compared to the rest of her

- Some of the hair seems too unnatural, super straight or just out of place

- the top of the hair actually seems too big, maybe make it skinnier?

- I think you should make the hair have more flow around the hood, because it looks like there's nothing behind the hood

-I think that the hood should rest on the shoulders more, because right now, it seems to be standing by itself on the shoulders

What you did pretty well on:

- you gave her a really pleasant expression

-i loaf the outfit

- I think that you can probably draw better anime hair than most of us here XD oh I can explain that, she wears 2 buns behind her hair, but when she takes those buns out she has long hair, :3